No one is wrong: Part 1 (of four) of my original story Power Trip is finished!
It was shorter than I had on my planification, lasting 10 chapters rather than 11.
A resume:
Hermond Riskowl, the leader of a criminal, motley team of men, sets up and prepares for a trip of a lifetime, through Monkawan Cities, in search of mysterious objects the boss asks for. However, his impulses from causing disaster leads him to rebel and destroy whatever he sees.
Each with their own issues, Allemard Pengam, Frederick 'Joule' Albawatt and Vincent von Cockagogh, alongside their rookie Floyd Eagleton, were chosen to 'help' Hermond finding those objects. Everything while preventing a well-chosen police team to pick them first... even if their main objective is on Hermond himself!
This resume is still prototypical, but as I progress with the parts, I may build a better one. I know it hurts, but yeah.
I may not know who of you reads the story, but I'll be glad if anyone does!
READ IT NOW:
https://www.deviantart.com/choonlasty-ghost/gallery/67844568/Story-Part-1
~ChoonLasty-Ghost
